Monday 29th june 2015

A moment of terror

L.G.to use sentences that show a moment in time.

S.C. describe the characters thoughts and feelings.

-describe the characters face and body language.

-describe what the character does.

the safety seat rose slowly higher and higher inch by inch until objects and people shrunk into toy size dimentions.my mind screamed with panic and fear wanting tto place my feet on the solid earth while my stomach bunge bounced my lunch out.terror froze my muscles almost to the point to passing out.as we were plumiting down my whole face as scared of my life.

By Ella

innocent mr wolf

L.G.to persuade others to our point of view.

S.C.-include personal pronouns(you.)

      -include a rhetorical question

      -develop three main ideas

      -make a recommendation in your conclusion

       

Hi children do you know the true story of the three little pigs? Well i’m here to convince you that Mr Wolf is innocent. I have three reasons why Mr wolf is innocent.

Firstly,Mr Wolf is innocent because he was only trying to bake a cake for his dear old Granny but he needed one cup of sugar so he went  next door to his neighbours to borrow one cup of sugar.

Secondly,Mr Wolf had a big bad cold and accidently sneezed while standing in front of the two little pigs homes regrettably flattening the two little pigs a in their homes.

Thirdly,the three little pigs were insulting Mr wolf about his Granny.

In conclusion, we can see that Mr wolf  just wanted to borrow a cup of sugar. He was suffering a really bad cold. And finally the pigs were rude,mean and insulting.

monday 27th july 2015

A shaduf

L.G.to persuade other people to our point of view.

S.C -include personal pronouns (you,I,we)

      -include a rhetorical question

      -develop three main ideas

      -make a recommendation in your conclusion

Hi children do you know what a shaduf is?I am here to explain to you how a shaduf  is a good technology in history.A shaduf helps dry country farmers water more land.It’s simple to make this technology.

Firstly,a shaduf is a good technology for moving water uphill to water more crops and to grow more farmland.

secondly,a shaduf is easy DIY technology.A shaduf is simple to make and also has many materials like wood,clay/animal skin and rope.

Thirdly, a shaduf is powered by man power to gather water by dipping the bucket into the river and pulling it up and down all day long.

In summary we can see that a shaduf is a good technology for farmers to shift and lift water to grow more crops.It hass csimple materials and it’ss easy to make.A shaduf is easy to operate.I recommend that everyone should surport the 40 hour fam’n to help farmers and their crops.

Ella makara