monday 27th july 2015

A shaduf

L.G.to persuade other people to our point of view.

S.C -include personal pronouns (you,I,we)

      -include a rhetorical question

      -develop three main ideas

      -make a recommendation in your conclusion

Hi children do you know what a shaduf is?I am here to explain to you how a shaduf  is a good technology in history.A shaduf helps dry country farmers water more land.It’s simple to make this technology.

Firstly,a shaduf is a good technology for moving water uphill to water more crops and to grow more farmland.

secondly,a shaduf is easy DIY technology.A shaduf is simple to make and also has many materials like wood,clay/animal skin and rope.

Thirdly, a shaduf is powered by man power to gather water by dipping the bucket into the river and pulling it up and down all day long.

In summary we can see that a shaduf is a good technology for farmers to shift and lift water to grow more crops.It hass csimple materials and it’ss easy to make.A shaduf is easy to operate.I recommend that everyone should surport the 40 hour fam’n to help farmers and their crops.

Ella makara