innocent mr wolf

L.G.to persuade others to our point of view.

S.C.-include personal pronouns(you.)

      -include a rhetorical question

      -develop three main ideas

      -make a recommendation in your conclusion

       

Hi children do you know the true story of the three little pigs? Well i’m here to convince you that Mr Wolf is innocent. I have three reasons why Mr wolf is innocent.

Firstly,Mr Wolf is innocent because he was only trying to bake a cake for his dear old Granny but he needed one cup of sugar so he went  next door to his neighbours to borrow one cup of sugar.

Secondly,Mr Wolf had a big bad cold and accidently sneezed while standing in front of the two little pigs homes regrettably flattening the two little pigs a in their homes.

Thirdly,the three little pigs were insulting Mr wolf about his Granny.

In conclusion, we can see that Mr wolf  just wanted to borrow a cup of sugar. He was suffering a really bad cold. And finally the pigs were rude,mean and insulting.